What world are we living in?
Where no one is your own,
Everyone is thinking about his own!
When you are smiling but actually wanna frown,
When you love, but are filled with hatred!
When they say, “I don’t have time”
But actually have ample of time!
Not doing anything and saying “Karma is not good”
Is today’s belief but that is not good!
Everyone wants everything to be done by itself,
But nothing to be done by themself!
Believe me no magic wand is gonna do it,
Or are you still waiting for some trick or gift?
Oh! Dear God save us from this fake world!!!!
Where blood relations are not given any importance,
But those fake friends are given all the importance!
We don’t wanna live in that world of loneliness,
But that of happiness!
Actually that’s what,
Gonna happen next!
He gave us the opportunity to become a human being,
But we are still busy disagreeing!
So, why not make complete use of it
And admit?
Life is short but days are long!
Is what makes me strong.
So let’s try to accept life as it is,
Or it will leave us wept at last!!!!
Thank you so much for reading!
GUNEEV KAUR

Well felt, well written & well described your poem is,
Indeed does it make us realise our lifeβs bliss !
Keep writing. Keep shining.
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Heap of thanks di!! It means a lot! You are my inspiration! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Guneev,hearty Congratulations. All the best to become a great poet.wonderful creation.
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Thank you so so much dear Sr!
Take care and stay safe !! ππ
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Excellent job dear π
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Thank you so much dear! β€οΈ
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You rocked it dear!
Actual description of what life nowadays is!
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Very nice poem….. Well done πππ
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Thank you Niyatiiiiiiiiiiii β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Very good ππ» Guneev, Good job ππ», keep it up dear ππ»
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Grateful Eknoor! π
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Amazing Guneev….I loved it …keep writing …stay shining ….keep it up …gr8 job
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Thank you so so much β€οΈ
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Lots of love to youβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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Very well done Guneev!! Really nicely written! All the best for the future and keep writing like thisππ»β€οΈ
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Heap of thanks dear! β€οΈ
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Well done Guneev .Well written .Keep it up
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Thank you loads! πβ€οΈ
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BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSED DEAR!
TRUE DESCRIPTION OF LIFE IN A FEW LINES!
HEART FELT ππ
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Thank you so much love! β€οΈ
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Superb ππ» Keep it up
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Thank you Japjit! π
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Very well done guneev …. u really an ambitious writer ….Tanishka this side ….πβ€β£
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Thanks a ton diii !! πΈβ€οΈ
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Remarkable !!……Very well written…you have really expressed the correct meaning of this world ππYou are really amazing π…..keep it up dear ππ
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Thank you dear! π
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Loved it!!!π Well writtenππ ….. Keep writing n keep us amazed…..was mesmorized ….. keep up the spirit dearβ€β€
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Thank you dear Purva! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Very well done! π keep it up…
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Grateful Gauranshi ! πΈπΈ
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So proud of you !! π
I was knowing you are an able writer but Wasnβt knowing ur SUPERB at it π·π· …. Keep shining πππππ
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Thank you so much love! β€οΈ
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Indeed!! Well written.. Just love it!! ππ
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Thank you loads Divjot! π
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I am speech less for the lines used in the poem, it’s commendable, amazing
At last I wanna say is it’s fantastic β€β€π€π€π€π₯π₯πππππ
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Thank you Nazima!! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Very well expressed. Beautifully crafted. Keep it up.ππ
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Thank you very much ma’am! Love you β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Great yaar keep rising and one day you’ll indeed be ad epitome of inspiration love you loadsπ§‘
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Hey thanks ya! Love you more! Huggggsss β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Well written guneev keep up the good work β€ it felt really deep
Good job dear π
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Thank you dear! β€οΈ
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Well done!!!! , well written, , π€©π₯° like it. Yaaaaa keep it up . Keep writing. πβ₯οΈ u described the truth of this world. Very much trueeeeeeeπβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈπ₯°π₯°π₯°πππππππ
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Ahhh!!! Thank you Priya Kamal…….β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Indeed, the reality !! Very well expressed dear Guneev
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Thank you so very much ma’am! All your guidance and blessings! πβ€οΈ
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Amazingly amazing, loved this! Hope you publish more like thisππ₯β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Bhoomi !! β€οΈ
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Thank you Bhoomi! π
Yeah I’ll do so! π
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Incredible!!π What an insightπ You amaze me everytime my dear. Soar high π Much Love π
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Thank you so so much dear Swati ma’am! Your blessings mean so much to me! β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Beautifully written! ππ
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Thanks dear for your appreciation! π
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Awesome work! Very well written!!πππππ
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Thank you so much aunty! πβ€οΈ
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You have written so nice guneev! Talented girβ¨β¨ππ
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Thanks a bunch my friend! π€β€οΈ
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Niceππ
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Thank you dear! π€
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So proud of u
Awesome Guneev ππ₯°
Well done ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
Didnβt knew about your this hidden talent
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Thank you Pearl ! ππ
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