You get addicted
You get diverted
Obstacle between you and yourself
You lose hope
You despair
Later……..but why?
Coz you spent your time using it unnecessarily
Not just old
But more do young
Fancy, Attractive
Makes you foolish..
Having it in your hand
A few more will always remain a few more
Unless you learn its importance
Wonder if it’s a drug
More powerful than Wine or Alcohol
Which slays you to be your friend
But is that really so?
Seconds get converted to mins
Further mins to hours
Yet our tummy never gets satisfied!
It devastates you
Unless you finally devastate it
Nevertheless
It’s not always bad
Yet at times it acts as your companion
But never always
Of which myth you live in
—GUNEEV KAUR
Guneev Kaur 
Wonderful my friend…Your poems ooze of perfection:P Thank you for sharing this with me:)
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Many thanks sweetheart ❤️
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Very Wonderfully and easily expressed the disadvantages of using phones!!….Your poems are always lovely and always have a message in them and that is why I always love your beautifully expressed poems and wait for more!!…..Keep on writing dear!!!….May God bless you!!❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much dear ! 💜
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Another one of your beautiful masterpieces 🌟✨… a poem expressing the truth untold ❄️… Loved this one as well !!! 💛💙 .. Lots of love 💖!! May god bestow his abundant blessings upon you 🌠🌸!!
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Immense gratitude and love your way! Glad you liked it. 💜
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Beautiful message guneev👏I don’t have words to express my feelings about this poem …your poems are really amazing. I feelhaooy and relaxed after reading your poems..waiting for your next poem !! IT’S WONDERFULL💞
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Thank you so so much my dear friend! 💜
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Such a nice poem🥰 I actually don’t have words to describe how good it is😅☺️ Keep writing and sharing🤗 May God bless youuu❤️
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Thank you! 😊💜
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gr8 guneev ..loved it
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Thanks a million! 💜
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Deep and lovely poem. I really liked this one. 💞🌈Your poems are beautiful. 💖Thank you for sharing.❄️Lots of love . May god bless you
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Thank you so much Namya! 💜
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How come I read the same poem again n again and everytime find something new….some new metaphor ,some new lesson, something I missed the very last time….u make art happen in such less words and a two minute read!😍keep up the great work… waiting for more!🤩
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Didi…this means a lot to me! You’re are so so encouraging ♥️ thank you loads!
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You’ve done a fantastic job Guneev! All your poems are beautiful!💕
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Thank you so much, Jasanahet! ❤️
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Beautiful poem
Loved it
Thanks for sharing.
Keep on writing such beautiful masterpieces 👏💯💯
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Thank you so much Prina! 😊
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So much truth in your wondeful, touching words.
Keep writing more 🌟🌟
To s and tons of love 💞
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Thank you dear! 💖
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Loved the use of ‘never’ and ‘always’ together.You have a great hold of words and a deep sense of aesthetic 👍 Good job Guneev. Keep writing❣️
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Thank you so much Aditi Di ! 💜
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What a beautiful poem it is!
Sooo beautifully written ❤❤
You are getting better with each poem you write 😘😘
Keep writing 😌😌 I feel so proud of you 🥺❤
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Thank you so much! Thank you for being a torch bearer.. keep guiding! xx ❤️❤️
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Wonderful poem !! Keep writing n sharing ❤😊🥰 , ♡, :)😘
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Thank you!
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I like ur poems very much,and u’ll be a very successful person in futur and my wishes r with u love ur poems as usual 😊
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Rain of thanks! 🙂
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