I want, I want and I want
Want to change the entire past, maybe as a commandant.
Change the history,
Hug the victory!
In no time and overnight,
Or maybe in the sober light.
Creating a new,
And asking the investigators to review.
Without nothing but everything,
To savour the spring 🙂
No sort of poverty, all sorts of equality
Having everyone at the same level of velocity.
No destruction, no wars
And of course, to meet everyone; all open doors.
No hunger, no resentment
For it would be a small amount of amendment
No kings, no princes; and of course no, slaves
All the peeps enjoying in their own waves!
If I could turn it,
All the bads would I quit.
If I could turn it,
All the trees filled with money, would I create; in kits.
If I could turn it,
Nothing in parts, would I split.
For there would be no one; for the animals to be hit.
If I could turn it,
Hours would I increase; yet many would be unfit.
As they are now
Always blaming thou!
Always despondent, looking at others gleaming in the flavours of success,
Why? Coz we want others to praise us….without winning the chess.
Having a tiny heart, not that you don’t possess big,
But because your eyes don’t prevent to see others, not even a twig.
Perhaps give us a chance
Maybe thousands of new Edisons would be the next in Thy glance!
Let the humans be humane,
Clutching no garbage in their brain.
Let everyone prove,
For thy can give us a chance to improve!
Change is Must,
Must is Change,
For both are necessary for ever and ever!
–GUNEEV KAUR

Yesss true i wish i could change the history……..but i can’t but yes we can make the future even better so lets focus on what we can do not on what we can’t.well written gunn💝💝
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Undeniably! Wishes are more but doings are less. Thanks dude! ❤️
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Amazing …loved it ..keep it up 👍👍👍
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Thank you so much! 🌸
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Amazing poem guneev . Really loved the way you expressed about a change . Keep it up!!
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Grateful dear! 🙂
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GlamFab as always 💫… Fantastic poem ✨..Your efforts are really applaudable Gunn 🌸👏🏻👏🏻!!
Lots of love 💛💛
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Heap of thanks buddy!
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Fantabulous gunneev..I just loved👏👏👏It is expressed beautifully… Keep up the good work🌟
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Guneev**
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💕
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Rain of thanks ❤️
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Fabulous poem …… Gr8 work
Keep writing keep shining
Lots of love
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Thankyou buddy! 💕
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Wow!!! Such a amazing poem . Thank you for sharing your vision . I appreciate your innovate thoughts that you share with your mesmerizing poems!!! ☺☺💯
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Thank you soooo much Prina! ❤️
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Beautiful poem… Loved it
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Thanks dear! 🤗
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*innovative
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Very beautiful thought. We can not change past but we do best for future. Keep writing Guneev. You are amazing. God bless you always.
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Thank you ma’am! 🤗
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Awesome work done, as always!🙌
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Thank you sweetheart! 💓
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Amazing work as always!!💖
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Thanks a lot! ❤️
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Very well written 💗❤️ outstanding job
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Thanks a bunch didi! ❤️
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This is the best of all your poems… Wait, all of your poems are the best in the world🤗 I love your poems sooo much💕✨ You are the best poet till date and I hope you become a famous Poet one day. But after becoming famous, please don’t forget me 😭 May God bless youuu❤️❤️❤️
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Of course, I won’t yaar! Thank you soooo much for this heartfelt message. Much love Bhoomi ❤️❤️
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Amazing and commendable as always!!❤️❤️……very well written!!😘😘….Keep writing and shining as a bright star!🌟🌟🌟
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Thanks a ton! 🙂 ❤
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The Future belongs to us and still there is time to change!
Not everyone can we make like ourselves, but I wish we dare to take small steps ourselves to create a hopeful and better tomorrow ❤️
Thoughts like yours are needed to make this world a better place 😊
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Indeed, small small footsteps will lead to so many big. Thank you for such lovely feedback X ♥️
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Great!! Indeed, changing the past is what pleases all, but focussing on future is what all appreciate. Keep it up, Guneev💐!
“No kings, no princes; and of course no, slaves”
It would surely be pleasant history to remember then 😊.
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Thanks a lot Prachi for this amazing review ❣️
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