Life is massive race,
Race that is hard to be accomplished, if we keep going on our pace..
Who knows from where it begins
It contains so many skins.
People bet
And respite
Life is His grace
Yet now a rat race…
Everyone in hurry
Filled with tons of worry!
Lies in galore
Which at times make your inner lion roar!
Life is a benediction
Hey reader!are you comparing it with your fiction.
I do,
Because I know somewhere it’s true
At the source, maybe at the mouth
Which lies where? In its own house
Life is active
Alike it wants everyone not to be tedious; rather attractive
Gorger is respected
Not that always he is genuflected
But because he is active
And for people makes him tractive!
Life is even fragile
Your task being, to also be agile.
To not to chuck it away, thinking the grime
Truly it’s your prime
From initial day
Accompanied…to a long way!
Life is beautiful
You yourself have to make it more suitable
Mustering the golds,
Not for the purpose of cajoles
Yet purpose of itself
And your ownself
Life is pretty soft
With our own hands, we make it more hot
Eliciting the J’s from us
It definitely can take us away from all the fuss
Without being an apathy
For later you sake sympathy!
Remember
Not to blast your temper
On pettiness
Leading yourself in gaining foolness
Life is quite a Phew!
Easy to pass thru!!
–GUNEEV KAUR

Yet another glamorous and epic literature piece !!! 🌈💛🎊 , well done gorgeous 👏🏻👏🏻💖
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Obliged my love x ♥️
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Beautifully penned..
The last para was like 🍒 on the cake 🎂. 😉😋
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Yay! Thank you ♥️
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Life is a valley of flowers
But its road is topsy turvy.
Just believe in Him and He will guide through the path❤️ great job as always Guneev 👍
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Means the universe xx love you Aditi di! You’re amazing inside out ♥️
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Lovely ❤
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Thank you ♥️
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Vry nicely written guneev ….keep it up ….👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Thanks di ♥️
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Amazing as always!….. Stupendous dear!!!❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you ✌🏻
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Marvelous and fascinating poem !!!!! Loved it !!!! Gr8 work 👏💐💐
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Thank you!!
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another masterpiece💥👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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Deep nd lovely poem.I really liked this one. Ur words are beautiful. Thanx for sharing this one with me 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your kind and motivating words!! ♥️
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Prodigieux! Beautiful as always🤗…. Loved it😍❤
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Grateful dear! ❤️
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Mind Blowing . I really admire the way you present your thoughts . Thoroughly enjoyed reading it . All the best for all your future writings.
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Handful of gratitude for such lovely review!
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Very beautifully written 😍 … keep it up
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Thanks a ton di!
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Very beautifully written 😍 … keep it up
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So kind of you. Thanks! 🙂
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Guneev you and your writings are awesome. I really enjoyed. Beautiful lines. May you always blessed with creative thoughts. Keep writing.
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Highly obliged ma’am! Means a lot!!
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Once again you entertained me with this literary work🥰 I am literally out of words, like I don’t know how to even describe what I feel after reading your poems 😍 Keep posting and May God Bless you💗 Lot’s of love and support from my side ❤️
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This cute girl’s review always makes me overwhelmed!! Thanks a million bunch Bhoomi xx hugs ♥️
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Lovely poem Guneev! I loved it! It’s really a masterpiece!!😍🤩
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Bundle of thanks Jasanahet! 😘
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loved this one!
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Yay!
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