She moves through the world
Always keeping her apt word
In various attires,
In various roles ..
She is the one
Who is responsible for that shining son
In glory ahead of the curve
Don’t you think something she deserves?
Considering a day
Naming it as women’s day
Is not just fair
By gifting a solitaire
That day, and vilifying on the others
Inside, She too possesses those colours
Colours of love and hatred
Colours for all those rewards she deserves, of those times she made you elated
She is the one who lets you live
And more than that, how to love the life, you live
Most of the times
She has enjoyed those bitters
Coating them with honey
Praying for their bunny..
She stays brawny
Even in her darkest hours of misery
For she never wants anyone to be disconsolate
Her being the reason of the state ..
Rising with her wings
Making sure, she has provided everything all through the springs ..
She has made a mark
Gearing in the dark
To shine in the gleaming light
For she equally deserves the rights
In spite of living in this so called female “dominated society”
She never demands anything from her buddy
Yet she favours, firmly
To believe in gentle neutrality
For not just women’s
But even men’s
Day should be especially celebrated
But each day, both of them should be equally respected !
Without any discrimination
Without any ratio in their evaluation ..
-GUNEEV KAUR

Amazing!! Everything mentioned in the poem is so accurate and the way in which the poem is expressed proves how creative you are !!❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you love xx thank you so much for reading and reverting! ❣️
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Fantabulous writing and true words . Really a great treat to read this wonderful piece of writing on the special day . Keep it up.
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Thank you!!
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Amazing guneev!;-)💙
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Thank you x ♥️
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Excellent! The way you put your thoughts and feelings into words in just brilliant !💕💕💕💕
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Heaps and heaps of thanks love! Xx ♥️♥️
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The poem was out of the world 💚 love reading it.. Every line had a deep emotion and a lot to say… ❤️❤️ Thanks for sharing ☺️. Keep it up ☺️💯👍.gr8 work
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Overwhelmed by this one! Thank you sweetheart xx 😗😘
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Excellent 👌👌👍👍👍👏👏👏
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Thank you xx 😚
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Fabulous! Your writings are always so….each n every word has its own importance…..great work Guneev👏🏻
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Gracious!!
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Fascinating👌…Its so true…you have really done a good job…
Your every poem have a good message…keep up the good work👏👏😍👌Love it…
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Thank you so much my dearest!! Xx
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Excellent Guneev! Ur poem is v. good…… Great work 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you girl! 💖
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keep shining strong one!
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Thank you my girl
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